Thursday, 17 March 2016

HOOKS in Narrative Writing

In writing we are learning about hooks.  I used a sound effect.

GRRRRRRRR!”  There are two volcanos in the Pacific Ocean smiling at each other.  One is a man and the other is a lady.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Pilinos,
    Your sentenced really hooked me in. I wanted to find out what happened next. Is this story going to carry on?
    Mahdia- Panmure Bridge School