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Tuesday, 28 August 2018

My Rhyming poem

I’m reading my book
I’m really really hooked
Dad yells it's your last warning
I run to the car and started yawning.

We’re on the way to Otara
To see my cuzzies there
To plan our family reunion

To get all the family here.



Thanks to Mrs Tele'a for helping me with my rhyming poem.
You are the best helper ever Mrs Tele'a

2 comments:

  1. HELLO PILINILOSE

    i love your Rhyming i really really love your poem and even thats really good that your best teacher Mrs Telea help you and plus she is a wonderful teacher i love your work and keep up the good work

    from your best friend apii

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  2. Hi Pilinilose I like how you made the words colourful it makes it very fun and exciting to read.

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