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Friday 20 September 2019

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WALT: write a hook for an explanation


What I am good at ?I'm not good at rugby but it’s good that  I decided to try my best.

There’s No Winning Or Losing There’s Just Trying.

What is Rugby? Rugby is a sport that is mainly played by boys and girls.I believe that rugby should be played by anyone in school. We should be able to play tackle rugby cause even though we get hurt and injured it is a lesson to face also it is a dangerous game to play because you could really badly injure yourself.

Should we allow it? We shouldn't allow it because people might get injured and you can get a broken neck from the tackle and that can actually kill you or you can get paralysed and you will need a neck brace. Also if they don’t  have a mouth guard to wear then they might break their teeth and might cry.

Is this sport dangerous? This sport is so dangerous because you can get brain damage or head concussion. And when they do get concussion they will lose their memories and they might not remember anyone or anything.

Can it damage us? This sport can also damage the school grounds or other peoples field. This can cause puddles , huge piles of mud and mud all over the carpet. Your parents will probably say take your muddy stuff off outside then walk all over her carpet.

What are you good at? Try things that you haven’t tried before and try it. It doesn't matter if you lose or win it’s just trying SO KEEP IT UP PEOPLE.


1 comment:

  1. Hi Pilinilose,This is so encouraging to those who play these kinds of sports.I really like this SEE body paragraphs but the part I really admired the most was the ending.Could you please encourage more and more people by adding you're own hook.Other than that bye plus keep doing you're best.

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